Project 2 Critiques
Kelsey's project came out outstanding. I think she did a really well job on finding a lot of found materials to make it look more like scrap book collages. My favorite one is the blue/blew pictures because of the way she angled the flowers in the blew image and how it really creates that feeling of something being blown by the wind. I also like how the texture from some of the material in the blue image looks. There isn't much she needs to work on, but if I could give any advice it would be to put less orange in the background of the date collage because I think it draws attention away from the orange in the actual number of the date. In the nail polish collage I think the white on the edge of the nail polish's could've been cut a little more neat. Lastly, maybe just doing a little less detail may have benefitted you. Jacob did a nice job on the image of the two people of the joint. I like the background and how it appears texturized and blocky. I also think he did a ...